Jack had a friend. His name was John.
Jack had another friend. Her name was Rachel.
Jack was always happy, he was always funny, he was always full of life. Jack loved Rachel. But she didn’t know. She had no idea. No one did. Jack was never good at showing his feelings towards girls.
Rachel and John got together. That made Jack very mad. But they didn’t know. No one knew what was troubling him. Jack used to spend a lot of time around them. Which would make him even madder. Jack would always try and be the same old funny guy everyone liked. And most of the time he succeeded. But beneath all the laughs, all the jokes and well-being, lied pain, suffering and anger.
Jack started to hate himself for his feelings. He wished they would all go away. He wished the pain would stop. He wished it would all stop.
And then he killed them.
The end.
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9 comentarii
Unty
07/12/2008 la 00:30Mda…
ovisebdan
07/12/2008 la 01:27Alex
07/12/2008 la 03:32:( da e ceva adevarat si ceva ce traiesc :(((
Vanilla
07/12/2008 la 09:27auch :-s sadic :-s uhm :-?
crisx
07/12/2008 la 11:58:)) FOARTE TARE, e facuta de tine?
mihai
07/12/2008 la 17:36Prima compunere ca tema la engleza va fi asta, daca imi dai voie ;)
ovisebdan
07/12/2008 la 17:45Sa-mi spui ce va zice profesorul.
mihai
07/12/2008 la 19:46sigur ;)
Rolly
15/12/2008 la 16:28nice story :))